Monday, December 22, 2008

A New Song Comments

Rating: 2.8

She was talking,
addressing me,
just words of course,
to shoot the breeze,
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Herbert Nehrlich
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Alison Cassidy 01 January 2009

'Incongruous it was, I see attraction, once bizarre may hang around our lives and titillate the idle mind.' This fine stanza seems to sum up this (Tara's right) eloquent, insightful piece - written from experience I suspect - which tells of the gnawing friction of past love, of words both old and new, of change and transformation. A fine read. Love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥

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