A New Planet Poem by Jan Oskar Hansen

A New Planet



A New Planet
For me, it is too late
But had been young I would
Have done my utmost to find another planet
Liveable for humans.
Think of it a planet without border
Not carved up into countries and rivalries
And threats from states with big land.
Just one continent where anyone could travel
Where they wanted no passport controls
Or unsightly walls.
A planet without religion to upset the peace
And of course, no political parties
No rules set by the mighty, the authority
Who divert rivers without asking the people?
In short, a planet for the people and
Animals in the wilderness.
Alas, since humans are settlers.
they will take their flaws along
and in time screw it up

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sandra Feldman 26 July 2019

The Poet knows what the Poet knows, writes and gifts us with. Thank you so much for this superb work.

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Sandra Feldman 26 July 2019

Excellent poem! Filled with the milk of human kindness, oh no, I can't say that, because it does not exist, here, now. But it might or could exist in a virgin planet if found and inhabited. Beautifully described. However, the best of the poem is your conclusion 'since humans are settlers" they will in time screw it up like with everything else we do or touch.

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