Tuesday, November 17, 2015

A New Place To Live Comments

Rating: 5.0

there comes a time some day in your life
when you need to change your arid ways
change the place where you have lived
so get ready theres a brand new phase
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amit mitra
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Souren Mondal 17 November 2015

A very well written poem Amit. Change is inevitable yet mostly dreaded and resisted.. Thanks for sharing..

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Ratnakar Mandlik 17 November 2015

Change will cut the old of you And change will keep you fresh and new Fantastic realization. Mutations always take place, though slowly, in all living things for making them more compatible with the changing circumstances. Enjoyed the poem. Thanks for sharing.10 points.

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