Thursday, July 5, 2018

A New Nation Comments

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When corruption of the kings touched the apex,
son of a pallet gun who had arisen to the rank of a machine gun,
smashed customs and traditions of the nation
with the scissors polished by a paste of gunpowder.
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Me Poet Yeps Poet 05 July 2018

Reading your political satire I agree with you entire and hear my version too politicians I don't love you but the balance kinds I came to know will post it against my wall don't arrow me I am no politician jawad ji

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Kelly Kurt 05 July 2018

I am not sure what the answer is, but recognizing the symptoms is a start. Few rulers have vied for (and won) leadership without already being among the wealthy elite, and or some form of inherent right or nepotism.

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Red Soul 05 July 2018

It's the same almost everywhere in the world - power-hungry corrupt politicians making a mockery of nations and their citizens. A powerful political write Jawad sahab. Thanks for sharing.

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Mahtab Bangalee 05 July 2018

......politician, game, jackal......kings or paramour.......reigns vain the circulations of veins at last we are lost and take a dependence of GOD! excellent descriptive writings of the theme of change

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Rajnish Manga 05 July 2018

A very bold political satire which reveals the game-plan of power-hungry leaders in succession ditching the nation for umpteenth time. We all are living a utopian dream. Thanks, Akhtar sahab.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 05 July 2018

A powerful political write. Corruption has many colors. It could change a man and nation drastically. It creates division and hate. The leech in society that should be terminated. It gives false hopes. A change for the worst. Brilliantly penned.

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