Love!
You rise like the sun
Dispelling the darkness
Your crimson rays colour my dreams
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Yes your description of love made it complete. There is no match to the experience it dons on us even though morn awaits at last. Good one.
Thank you so much for sharing this New Morn. Such a fascinating poem, I love to read and re-read again. My heartaches go away too.
My pains melt away In your sweet embrace My dreams take wings Flutter and fly Singing the sweet music of nature And writing a poem of new morn.So most beautifully worded, ah mesmerizes me, dear poetess Bharati! 5 Stars full and to my Favourites.
Arrival of moon has brought up new and calm love and sun will smile next day. Thank you very much for sharing. his poem is full of stars and beautiful one. Rga
May the dream take wings, flutter and fly! Wonderful poem Bharati. Loved every line. Top stars
Nothing else but love that can bring joy, where pains melt away in sweet embrace.
Dear Bharati, Such a beautiful poem, so full of hope and sunshine.
Every morrow is in wait for us with a hope...and it is true that we dream about it with much expectation....wonderful write Bharati....5*****
Awesome poem to begin a fresh day. My pick from your poem: In your sweet embrace My dreams take wings Flutter and fly Singing the sweet music of nature....100****
An exquisitely composed work, serene and sweet. Thank you for sharing
My pains melt away In your sweet embrace My dreams take wings Flutter and fly Singing the sweet music of nature And writing a poem of new morn. OUTSTANDING VERSE
What a heart-felt words on love 'My pains melt away in your sweet embrace'. Yes, the fog of pain vanishes in the sunrise of love