Saturday, May 15, 2021

A New Morn Comments

Rating: 5.0

Love!
You rise like the sun
Dispelling the darkness
Your crimson rays colour my dreams
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Bharati Nayak
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What a heart-felt words on love 'My pains melt away in your sweet embrace'. Yes, the fog of pain vanishes in the sunrise of love

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Varsha M 25 May 2021

Yes your description of love made it complete. There is no match to the experience it dons on us even though morn awaits at last. Good one.

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Sylvia Frances Chan 25 May 2021

Thank you so much for sharing this New Morn. Such a fascinating poem, I love to read and re-read again. My heartaches go away too.

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Sylvia Frances Chan 25 May 2021

My pains melt away In your sweet embrace My dreams take wings Flutter and fly Singing the sweet music of nature And writing a poem of new morn.So most beautifully worded, ah mesmerizes me, dear poetess Bharati! 5 Stars full and to my Favourites.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 16 May 2021

Arrival of moon has brought up new and calm love and sun will smile next day. Thank you very much for sharing. his poem is full of stars and beautiful one. Rga

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May the dream take wings, flutter and fly! Wonderful poem Bharati. Loved every line. Top stars

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Nothing else but love that can bring joy, where pains melt away in sweet embrace.

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Dear Bharati, Such a beautiful poem, so full of hope and sunshine.

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Indira Renganathan 16 May 2021

Every morrow is in wait for us with a hope...and it is true that we dream about it with much expectation....wonderful write Bharati....5*****

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M Asim Nehal 16 May 2021

Awesome poem to begin a fresh day. My pick from your poem: In your sweet embrace My dreams take wings Flutter and fly Singing the sweet music of nature....100****

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Kevin Patrick 15 May 2021

An exquisitely composed work, serene and sweet. Thank you for sharing

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me poet yeps poet 15 May 2021

My pains melt away In your sweet embrace My dreams take wings Flutter and fly Singing the sweet music of nature And writing a poem of new morn. OUTSTANDING VERSE

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