Thursday, July 27, 2017

A New Metaphor Comments

Rating: 5.0

death is not the setting sun
the sun will rise again
it is not the silence of midnight
for dreams are never silent
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Barry Middleton
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Kumarmani Mahakul 27 July 2017

Beautiful definition of death has been inscribed in this poem. I appreciate it. Thanks for sharing. A..10

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Dimitrios Galanis 27 July 2017

You can give to death all the names and characteristics life itself has not.But what is most undesirable and terrible is to live a dead's life which very often happens.That's why I appreciate your conception here.It shows so clearly what one would like life to be.kudos Barry.

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Ayesha Cullen 27 July 2017

Loved the way you wrote it. Those imagery and metaphors! Thanks for sharing.

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Nosheen Irfan 27 July 2017

What a creative write. Indeed death is darkness beyond all darkness. A terrible reality that is beyond comparison of everything terrible. A thing that man has brooded on since centuries but couldn't solve the mystery of. Very profound. A huge 10.

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Barry Middleton 27 July 2017

Nosheen, thanks. Excuse me if I do not respond My illness has gotten much worse.

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