Saturday, April 11, 2009

A New Memoir Of An Evolutionary Eyewitness Comments

Rating: 5.0

On a river’s current
On a shining waves
Gently floating on
Its charming risings
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Ahmad Shiddiqi
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Subbaraman N V 17 May 2009

I am indeed beholden to you for your love and respect! May God bles you! Do many more such beautiful poems!

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Sonya Florentino 14 April 2009

a glorius celebration of a new life...

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Antonio Liao 14 April 2009

oh! wonderful land I believe. that you see...you have very beautiful imagination so perfect of the heart that call to calm the roaring sea....listen as I whisper the Shinning star that looks beneath the golden daffodils.....seems I carried out by your mystic’s words...of a new Memoir of a new you...my friend... thank you and God speed...a 10+

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Louis Rams 13 April 2009

two hearts joined in heavenly bliss. very good

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Kranthi Pothineni 13 April 2009

I like the way you structured your thoughts. Nice.

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marriage. sanctity. being one forever. i love..

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Anthony Foster 12 April 2009

A gentle poem about love and commitment. As allways the discriptive prose is amazing

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Christina Phan 12 April 2009

amazing job its was beautiful peace of work 10+

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Sandra Martyres 12 April 2009

A beautiful poem right to the very end...The last few lines are wonderful 10 from me

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Juan Carlos Abeti 12 April 2009

certainly a vere beautiful piece of work, good job

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Maria Barbara Korynt 12 April 2009

Love which you are describing, is fine and clean, worth every sacrifice. Wonderfully! Very much I like him. 'I never did harm to a living soul! Nobody shall sleep! I lived for my art! I lived for love! On the river bank Covered with flowers Smiling in the morning Let us descend together! ' - this is very beautiful! Greetings for you :) Maria Barbara Korynt

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Your poem speaks of love and joy. I thought the last four lines were delightful. You have put so much thought into this beautiful piece of work. Top marks Karin Anderson

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Rajaram Ramachandran 12 April 2009

I feel myself young like you when I read this poem.

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Ramesh T A 12 April 2009

Evolving poetry with the background of Nature enriches the mind with freshness of Nature!

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Ency Bearis 12 April 2009

a great write and nice to read..well penned..

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Subbaraman N V 12 April 2009

Yes; Let us descend together and spread the fragrance of love all over! A nice and enjoyable write! Congrats!

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Ahmad Shiddiqi

Ahmad Shiddiqi

Semarang, Central Java, Indonesia
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