Monday, June 6, 2016

A New Love Story Comments

Rating: 5.0

The sun sets alone but leaves behind,
A moon and stars and the Milky Way,
The sky that becomes a pneumatic tray,
Pours down the filtrate not seen in a day!
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Chinedu Dike 13 January 2017

Beautiful! Insightful! Exquisite! With lovely rhyme scheme. Thanks for sharing Jawal.

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Khalida Bano Ali 06 October 2016

What a poem! .........................................................

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Edward Kofi Louis 06 July 2016

Pleasing beauty! ! With the muse of life and love. Nice work.

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