A New Love..... Comments

Kindled by the feeling of love like fire.

I like the way you presented your topic. Excellent metaphors and symbolisms. The emotions flow throughout the poem. I could sense the growing and glowing excitement of a new love. A lovely read.

This Poem is a credit to you! and I have to say how much I relate to those feelings you convey with excellence 10 +++++++

Hi Chris I really liked this poem. Poems can make or break on the use of sybolism. Your symbolism is absolutely spot on. I also like the balance and rythm. Only one tiny criticism, I wonder if you could have included the 'fire'; symbolism in the title. I'm new here look me up some time ...........10 Steve

The way you express 'a new love' is so true. Your words paint a lovely picture of those feelings.

Chris you are a G.....From strength to strength....Can only get better.....I hope you take this further....been telling you for ages you ARE good! xxx

your painting of love synchronising well with the free flow of flowering verses.very enchanting indeed. A +