A New Life (Frances/Aufie) Comments

Not just anywhere! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

Wow very creatively thought up poem. Yeah too much TV is not good for human or bugs eh. I enjoyed how u described the emergence of the butterfly. Great collaboration poets. Kudos for the rhyming as well. Nice to read from your pen again, I hope u will too my latest.

I enjoyed this romp! I am pleased it didn't turn purely political- - -certain names are already getting way too much press anyway! We would live a more healthy life if we stayed away from the trivial and the angry on the screen! Great job, you two!

yes it is interesting. nice to read the work of two.

A great wee story and i love that the butterufly has a name (Donny) that adds the humour to it.

Great collaboration! Enjoyed the beautiful story with a moral!

A beautiful mixture of pallette, a combined artistry idea! so colourful

So it's a joint venture, output of two poetic brains, wish I could know the stanzas written by you and those written by Sister Frances.

Life is sometimes not a bed of roses. True expression! Sylva