Monday, November 7, 2011

A New Life For Me Comments

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On twenty four July of eighty five,
a Trailways bus I did ride,
the destination of Jackson [Basic Training],
a new life for me,
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Richard McClellan
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Neela Nath Das 01 March 2012

At first I'd like to salute you Richard. You are a soldier -poet like Owen. The vivid description of your the then life has been depicted nicely.Your poem is excellent..

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James Casey 28 February 2012

The one thing about the military is structure, After 10 years in, I got out and couldn't figure out for the life of me how civilians got anything done they were so disorganized. Your poem does a pretty good job of following boot camp in verse. good write, Thanks for the memories Jim 1956 -1966

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