Today is the great day,
The beginning of another life;
The rhythm of music waltzing in her heart,
A smile unknowingly played on her lips.
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the emotions of a bride on her wedding day is amazingly expressed.. each imagery and allusion is wonderful.. loved it....10
The excitement, anxiety and euphoric anticipation of an would be bride are beautifully expressed! Also the fanfare and the hustle bustle of a house getting ready for a ceremonial function like a marriage! Very impressive, Jaishree! A 10
Beautiful poem. While all other run around with excitement and joy a bride sits quiet holding her emotions, her excitement and her anticipations. You have penned it all with amazing clarity and tenderness. Thank you for sharing.