Sunday, August 30, 2015

A New Life Begins Comments

Rating: 5.0

Today is the great day,
The beginning of another life;
The rhythm of music waltzing in her heart,
A smile unknowingly played on her lips.
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Jaishree Nair
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Savita Tyagi 30 August 2015

Beautiful poem. While all other run around with excitement and joy a bride sits quiet holding her emotions, her excitement and her anticipations. You have penned it all with amazing clarity and tenderness. Thank you for sharing.

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Sanjukta Nag 30 August 2015

the emotions of a bride on her wedding day is amazingly expressed.. each imagery and allusion is wonderful.. loved it....10

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Valsa George 30 August 2015

The excitement, anxiety and euphoric anticipation of an would be bride are beautifully expressed! Also the fanfare and the hustle bustle of a house getting ready for a ceremonial function like a marriage! Very impressive, Jaishree! A 10

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Kelly Kurt 30 August 2015

A very well written, captivating poem, Jaishree

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Abdulrazak Aralimatti 30 August 2015

A good description of emotions indeed

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