A New Life Comments

That was pure enjoyment. Thank you. And after having read so many somber and sad works I was elated by the last, 'No more tears or feeling lonely, Since I became, 'The One and Only'...' Romeo Della Valle

Dear Romeo Della Valle, A wonderful poem portraying your desire to ring in a new life. Best wishes in your efforts to forget the past and to live in the Present. Warm regards, Kannan

Congratulations you have finally out of misery and was born again. You can move on now. Defeating the harsh realities of life. Another brilliant creation from a brilliant writer. The rhyming were truly preempted and it's right there, unforced and smooth flowing. Each rhyming word readily connect to the next line. This is what I mean 'smooth and unforced'.10+

Great poem, and very insperational, once more you have express your toughts and feelings in a free but poetic way. - ur forever friend

Sailing in the sea of sweet srenity after sailing in the streesful storm. Well done my friend.

Now, my new love is just for humanity, wonderful confessional poem, well-structured, with strict rules of composition, very well expressed ideas... 10/10

a new realization = a new life reconnecting with the Higher Self. A new life for realizing the soul's purpose well written! !

like an eagle that soars and a lion that roars, you are free indeed to be free! nice write!

When I die, I want to leave a legacy behind. Dying with a clear heart and mind... A heart broken but a pride still untarnished... Why worry about a love already vanished...? This particular stanza is really touching and coincidentally my guiding principles in life.We must die by leaving marks for people to track.We must die without causing people pain that can never heal.we must be proud of being broken but became strong in the process and finally brush aside hurting thing which can never be undone. this is a great lesson for humanity to imbibe.Thanks for sharing this wonderful piece!

This is a wonderful write however when something old dies one must be careful. with what is consider as a rebith Society as being fooled dont be.... I know you know what i am talking about..... great job my friend 10

Great write filled with hope and peace... Happy New Year...

it's really a new life..the piece is nicely done..happy new year, a new day has come..

Hi Romeo Firstly...Happy New Year.. and thanks for your message.. A new life....it is a nice written..Romeo.. ans yes..Mother nature's laws I can't defy..10+ .

Excellent poem brother and the 'one and only' line adorns very much!

A SMALL 'I' and a big 'me' that is we are asout..a great thought from the big me..even after the small i has been hurt

veryy sweet; i love the steadiness of the rhymes - it makes the poem flow.. well done :)

a good poem man.........i like......