Sunday, July 12, 2009

A New Life. Comments

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The ringing of the bells,
The fluttering in the air,
Brings around,
The sweet thought,
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Y Sunita Devi
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Zachary Clark 20 September 2009

Sing song poem I love it.

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Chitra - 12 August 2009

a great write..capturing the spectrum of emotions involved when emabraking on a new phase in life

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Vijay Menon 18 July 2009

nice poem best words apt verses liked it 10+++

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Afzal Shauq 14 July 2009

On the most auspicious day, The intended was made to feel, The queen beauty of the day, With flowers and sweet fragrance, Twittering all through to her new home. hmm again the same romantic way of writing..liked it very much dear friend and let me say you deserve 10/10

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Sebastine Humaemo 14 July 2009

Ahh Winnie....i can feel a much matured write.....this poem speaks a lot about happenins to a newly wed girl n day to day real life........sweet and pleasnt.......lines make me feel as if hw it wll be, if am n tht stand....haha as a poet guess i can imagine myself as a girl to feel the lines haha cant i? ..lol ............n short a Divine write........10000++++++++ sebastine

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