Thursday, July 21, 2011

A New Life Comments

Rating: 5.0

I don’t know what to do so much is going on
At times my life just feels like a con
I want it to stop I just want to be
So why do bad things happen to me?
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Ahmed Abomahfouz 09 January 2012

your poem affected me alot..when friends are not supportive they are not real friends.thepoem marks 10

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Hold on young lady. The poetry in the poem is good. you have a nice flow. Things will get better.

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No Ones Bidness 25 July 2011

Nice Poem, but It should be was not is in the last line

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