Thursday, February 21, 2008

A New Life Comments

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All alone in the pouring rain
Carrying nothing with me except the pain
The pain you put into my heart
My heart will somehow make a new start
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Alfred Ramos
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K. V. Venkataramana 02 April 2008

I liked your imagery in the poem. It is a nice write.

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Sulaiman Mohd Yusof 01 March 2008

when you got what you desired, it's like gaining a new life.

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Anita Atina 26 February 2008

Oh this is such a brave poem, making the pain beautiful, and looking beyond, at life ahead. Cheers Anita

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