A New Horse For A New Day Comments

It's a value laden piece with an inbuilt message. I love this fabulous poem.

His name is the past.... the substantial aspect of this wonderful write. Top score and to my favourite.

Suresh Kumar, sometimes yes, sometimes no, poetry gets to break the rules in favor of presenting ideas and images and sometimes even murders the poor grammar lady

be present perfect continuous.

Robert, I like the way you put this so succinctly! ! ! !

Anjandev, thank you for choosing that line out of all the others!

Edward! ! Glad you liked it- what with the dead horses and all it is way out of your wheelhouse, I think, but you put up with it nicely! !

Robert, Yes, you are right about life leaving us a dead horse everyday.

" Not by riding dead horses" ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

Rini, just in case my reply doesn't show up in the reply box- here it is====I am glad you found it unique and relevant to our lives!

I do not know if my replies are showing up in the reply boxes so just in case I will also use the comment box to record my reply! Indeed, Anjandev, their name should be Love.... Thank you for such an uplifting comment!

And ultimately his name is Love........glorious piece....thank u, dear poetess. anjandev roy.

Sandy Hoss- My reply box isn't working but we" ll try this. Ah, come on, we horse lovers can't pass up a poem that has the word horse in it! ! ! ! It's a physical impossibility to say NAY NEIGH to one! I'm glad you got a KICK out of this and PONIED up a 10 for it. Oh, I couldn't help myself

This is tremendous, love it! I am not saying that just because I'm an old West-Texas cowboy who loves good horses either! ! ! I agree completely with you; superb statement, wise words, and powerful poetry. A definite ten-plus for me.

If the horse has been dead for 10 years- Dismount don't yet this horse has so far decades last yet is not passed If the horse has been dead for 10 years- Dismount okay shall SW as u SAY MA'AM

If The Past, Misery, Unforgiveness = dead horse/ failure Forgiveness, peace, love = new steed/ success # Let we follow you 10/10 well done superb work with strong metaphor and message

Let's ask for a miracle Because these dead horses cannot be mended by any human hands

The dead horse! A beautiful inspiring poem.10

horse rider yes, has a heart heart of love.... mount yes mount on it with love dead! oh! for your dismounting with hate now it is in dead! come to it with love look miraculously it carries you to God......

Really thought provoking...and that dead horse, we usually find ourselves 'beating it.' Riding suggests some optimism or faith, albeit, as you suggest, very misplaced. When forced with a reality of having to change, it is fascinating how that horse represents the duality of our flawed nature...that stands in our way before we must change. A perfect 10!