Friday, June 20, 2014

A New Heart Comments

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I know i needed a change from this behavior
My prayers all day to the savior
Have been a fool
Yes i made myself subject
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gbenga amusan
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Sana Ghostana 20 June 2014

I like the humility in this poem of yours. You admit you have faults, that you have went wrong, such in your lines: I know I needed a change from this behavior (and) even though at times I do not mean what I say. You've done an excellent job here.

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