a lovely new life
a lovely new beginning
a lovely new flower
a lovely new face there
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Day to day life's inevitable dejections..........pains, ennui of hackneyed life.....very well written
I like the thought behind this poem, well written by you 10 Lynda xx
life sometimes could be boring and exasperating. We get on every morning with our wishes for a better day.
an interesting write..circular in nature...realism and fantasy..so well merged
A change to refresh and tired of old craps...meaningful write..
a truth unfolds itelf from your short lines. i agree. new is fresh. shan
Peot seems fed up with the relations and morns in the day to day life Good aspire to have a lovely life' very nice sir +++++10 Sandhya
a very nice rhyme, words are greatly penned.Thanks for sharing
A fascinating mixture of idealism and realism.Excellent work. Warm regards, Sandra
there s a comparison between old and new..a new face means a new identity, new personality.....i like the flow of the description of your work...it is very beautiful...realistic it is...the context compliments the title...the whole poem is very excellent....cheers to the next invitation saman.. naizz
expressive write, meeting of a stranger is lovely though a stranger in disguised, nay! ? ...Lovely poem....10+++
The word personality is derived from word persona(means mask) . I think we all wear mask.................. Good write......