Saturday, February 14, 2009

A New Face Comments

Rating: 5.0

a lovely new life
a lovely new beginning
a lovely new flower
a lovely new face there
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Samanyan Lakshminarayanan
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Dr Hitesh Sheth 26 February 2009

The word personality is derived from word persona(means mask) . I think we all wear mask.................. Good write......

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Sathyanarayana M V S 24 February 2009

Day to day life's inevitable dejections..........pains, ennui of hackneyed life.....very well written

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Lynda Robson 23 February 2009

I like the thought behind this poem, well written by you 10 Lynda xx

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Eddie Roa 22 February 2009

life sometimes could be boring and exasperating. We get on every morning with our wishes for a better day.

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Chitra - 20 February 2009

an interesting write..circular in nature...realism and fantasy..so well merged

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Ency Bearis 20 February 2009

A change to refresh and tired of old craps...meaningful write..

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Rm. Shanmugam Chettiar 20 February 2009

a truth unfolds itelf from your short lines. i agree. new is fresh. shan

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Sandhya S N 19 February 2009

Peot seems fed up with the relations and morns in the day to day life Good aspire to have a lovely life' very nice sir +++++10 Sandhya

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Meggie Gultiano 18 February 2009

a very nice rhyme, words are greatly penned.Thanks for sharing

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Kranthi Pothineni 17 February 2009

Beautiful and excelled...good work

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Sandra Fowler 16 February 2009

A fascinating mixture of idealism and realism.Excellent work. Warm regards, Sandra

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Naidz Ladia 16 February 2009

there s a comparison between old and new..a new face means a new identity, new personality.....i like the flow of the description of your work...it is very beautiful...realistic it is...the context compliments the title...the whole poem is very excellent....cheers to the next invitation saman.. naizz

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Catrina Heart 16 February 2009

expressive write, meeting of a stranger is lovely though a stranger in disguised, nay! ? ...Lovely poem....10+++

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