A New Dictionary Of An Elusive Love Comments

nice piece love it well luwi

Shiddiqi, This is an awesome poem wonderfully composed with apt similes and metaphors. But as Shakespeare says, Love is not love that alters when alteration finds. On love's surface bubbles blink and blow, But deep down its undercurrents ever flow. CP

beautiful words indeed, a precisely described love...10

definetly a new dictionary of describing love. good write, worth the 10 I gave you.

'When least expected, there it is! ' - this is the essence of love which most of us forget. I consider that this line happens to be the height of the poem and if you had put a full stop to the poem at this point, it would have been better. The rest of the poem happens to be just another love affair.

temperamental/demanding/leaves one restless/and surprisingly whole too...salute this emotion that can generate every other emotion in human mind!

indeed, love has a mind of its own....

it shows me hope, despair, and finally the love sets in to take control. gr8t write a ten

A really encyclopaedic discription. +10

this piece is well planned, well written..and congratulations to this new dictionary of love, , , , this will help all the lovers to find new terminologies for love..quiet exciting ha...lav this piece, promise, , naizz

Loved or elusive love and yes it did not elude my glue into details.++++++++++10

You show so much effort in your poetry and it pays off great work :)

I particularly like the lines: Love is a rebellious raven That nobody can tame'Nothing helps, neither threat nor prayer. A very interesting composition of words, that is woven in spirit.

Sweet poem of love..... touchy one 10

wonderful poem, you give love anther definition, i like it

This poem has a nice feel throughout the end. Good.

'One man talks well to someone else dreams'; 'When least expected its there'. Beautiful poem Ahmad, it brings with it the freshness of teenage-love.

This is what I call exceptional.Unique allegory and expression that your poetry delivers in general.Thanks for sharing. Best wishes. A.

Now, this is a poem on love.. brilliant in its descriptions.

A good write, a good read, and in the garden of inspiration it sows a seed.