Friday, November 18, 2016

A New Day Will Come Comments

Rating: 4.3

I am waiting for so long
For the perfect fate to come along
Everyone says I'm wrong
To ignore the place where I belong.
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Mercy Mg
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Dr Antony Theodore 12 December 2019

In the doom of darkness My life is aimless Yet my faith is boundless That a new day will be harmless a new day will surely come because you believe in a God who looks after you and care for you. God bless you for this poem. tony

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S.zaynab Kamoonpuri 27 November 2016

A nice appealing love poem in super rhyming. Enjoyed the alps line lots. Kudos or the poetry. U r most welcome to comment under my latest poem too titled Ashurah, pls don't forget to.

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Mercy Mg 13 December 2016

Thanks. Zaynub.

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