Monday, February 24, 2014

A New Day Of Life Comments

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A very new day dawns at your feet
Awakening those whom you've to defeat
It is fresh, maiden and lacks its fate
It will accept whatever your hands will create
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Himanshu Mishra
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Dr Antony Theodore 26 September 2018

seeing a new day as a blessing from God to committ and work hard to achieve.........a great message you are giving to the reader........ yes every new day is a blessing and we have to thank the Almighty God for it and promise to do the best every given day.. thank u. tony

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Shraddha The Poetess 27 February 2014

veryyyyyyy nice.....beautiful choice of words and created in a very nice sequence......with rhythem...........liked it......... although i also invite u to read mine..

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Gajanan Mishra 24 February 2014

arise and burn yourself Peace and happiness, good one.

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Prasanna Kumari 24 February 2014

beautiful poem with rhyme and rhythm.....

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Himanshu Mishra

Himanshu Mishra

Gorakhpur, India
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