Saturday, July 16, 2011

A New Day. Maybe? Comments

Rating: 5.0

I have new scars,
That show a new day,
A day with fear,
A day with regreats.
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jess jayne
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Tammie Aimson 04 April 2012

new scars hurt but rembering the old ones are even more painfull, i should no. great! ! xxtamara

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Adi Cox 21 July 2011

This poem is not full of false hope and I like it for that gritty realism. Sometimes it feels good to wallow in misery. I do it often. I think that the title would be better fit if it was 'A New Day. Maybe Not? ' because nothing changes and your past is always with you. Am I standing on sacred ground here? It is your poem not mine.

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