A New Day Comments

It is always better to go walk into the day when the light lights up the earth. I liked the concluding stanza very much.

Lovely poem, ! Beautiful.

nice to catch your poem here on contest n my pleasure to vote on it........: -)

Beautiful poem..Each lines well expressed. Loved reading it.

Beautiful words rolling! :) _SOul

A well constructed i really enjoyed reading...

Many mornings I just turn over and go back to sleep for awhile. The night goes by too quickly. a nice wrie

Ahh yes, the days at school where some just feel like turning over and falling straight back not sleep under their warm covers :) I am the same. Great poem :) -W

Love the third stanza. Sleep is extremely important. I like the 8-hour concept. This is a beautiful poem.

it touched my heart: ') 10/10

This is beautiful piece a nice sleep to a beautiful dream

Just to dream a little more before reality intrudes. Nice poem Thanks for sharing BB : O)

The immense responsibilities waiting with the dawn of day, make us wish to curl under the warm cover and sleep on! A very natural human desire. If you are interested, I invite you to read my poem, A Pleasant Respite expressing almost similar feelings. Enjoyed reading this lovely poem! !

Thoughts of the daily grind do make us want to roll over and stay put, but alas we have to rise and face another day of chores and bad weather! Good one David.

great write this morning is too early to greet a sleep less time sir next line also about the same well writ poem sir read it repeatedly to grasp

A great poem, I could have done with another few hours myself this morning.