Wednesday, July 29, 2009

A New Day Comments

Rating: 5.0

i woke up today
when the sun in my eyes
a smile on my face
and no need to cry
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lindsay rose
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Jen Capaldi 11 October 2009

short but still so sweet and to the point in a very vibrant and creative way. well written. Jen

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Bryan Alexander 21 September 2009

not bad love not bad at all......

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Almedia Knight-Oliver 20 September 2009

The hardest part of eve ry thing is lonely nights, good write.. keep writing...read lots and lots of poetry. you have a poetic voice.

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Noel Horlanda 20 September 2009

there's always a new day, a new life to work on. And every new day means to move on no matter what. Each new day is a miracle, a new beginning, a new love... the theme of this piece is wonderful and lovely.

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Carol Gall 18 September 2009

nice poem lindsay......

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Raj Arumugam 08 August 2009

smooth flow of lines that catch the emotion well

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Black & White Right 08 August 2009

Sweet. enjoyed this poem-

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Koushik Poolla 31 July 2009

That's marvelous! ! would be better if the words were rhyming..

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M.j. Daniels 30 July 2009

Verry well put Lyndsay. I like it

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