i woke up today
when the sun in my eyes
a smile on my face
and no need to cry
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The hardest part of eve ry thing is lonely nights, good write.. keep writing...read lots and lots of poetry. you have a poetic voice.
there's always a new day, a new life to work on. And every new day means to move on no matter what. Each new day is a miracle, a new beginning, a new love... the theme of this piece is wonderful and lovely.
That's marvelous! ! would be better if the words were rhyming..
short but still so sweet and to the point in a very vibrant and creative way. well written. Jen