Monday, March 9, 2009

A New Day Comments

Rating: 5.0

almost it ended, before it started, when all
what is given is losing its grip, the journey
becomes a hoax to survive
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Antonio Liao
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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 09 November 2009

am in you and you are in me, in this garden of life, a reveling truth that a new day has started to sprout in our lives...........................life is not hoax and it will go on. new day with new brgining thatis way of life to be lived on... bautiful write and appriciable....10 read mine.. i am disgrace...goback.... pulled from deep sleep

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Rachel Butler 28 October 2009

'A new day has come to witness the true in me to you' Rachel Ann Butler

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Yelena M. 17 June 2009

Everything is connected in this world..the new dawn brings new hope to all of us...Thanks for sharing this lovely poem.10+++ Best wishes. A.

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a awakening write...a 'you' in 'me' and a me in you...lovely poem i take this into my favs

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Ashraful Musaddeq 04 May 2009

A nice poem with nice ending.

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Naseer Ahmed Nasir 10 March 2009

Beautiful poem.....An internal monologue.....A new person and a new beginning is emerging from a new day. The simpilicity of the structure and the contents is its beauty...... A simple 10. Regards Naseer

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