Wednesday, January 28, 2009

A New Day Comments

Rating: 4.3

with just a 24 hour day
with a flower blossoming every day
with a cloud changing its face every single day
we the tiny people.....don't
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Samanyan Lakshminarayanan
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Reshma Ramesh 02 March 2009

yes.......how true........well said

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each day be new to start and old atlast..wht really matters is the deeds not the days n hrz.. loved the poem...

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Cherry Sha 11 February 2009

A very nice composition with which one may realize the importance of of the each day...a new day..not just another day..Beautiful idea..thanks

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Indira Renganathan 10 February 2009

True..it's just a new day..but we human beings measure the span of life between birth and death within which we explore attempting at all sorts of things..interesting poem10

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Antonio Liao 09 February 2009

i like it reading...every now i then.... for it gives me a lesson that my heart always remember the new day that God gives...very beautiful indeed... for life to reflect the meaning of existence....thank you my friend and God bless you

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Sathyanarayana M V S 08 February 2009

Sir, I fully agree with you. A nice poem

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C. P. Sharma 06 February 2009

Samanayan, Each day is a new day, We plan before and make it old; We have a conditioned mind Approach it with prejudices cold. CP

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Vinod Kumar 05 February 2009

Amazing Lines, each and every tiny things have their own time table, thanks for sharing, Good Day,10++

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Dr.subhendu Kar 30 January 2009

as man has to learn many things from nature, .and the time ahead always ebounds as new day, well opennwed,10+, thanks for sharing

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Meggie Gultiano 29 January 2009

Just another day, but have to look forward to enjoy it to the fullest. this is nice, poetry at its best.

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Sreelekha Premjit 29 January 2009

I agree wholeheartedly, we never seem to see things the way we should, do we? a beautiful piece. Thanks.

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Catrina Heart 28 January 2009

Reading through it seems that you were just going around the bush of a new day, but making it in capital letters it expressed connotations of word...looking the bright side of life to make things right, planned ahead and a step of today for a brighter tomorrow..10

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Anjali Sinha 28 January 2009

a lovely write so well expressed -10 anjali

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Linda Winchell 28 January 2009

I am pleased my poem had inspired you to write this. Great job. Linda

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