I bid adieu
to a long hard night,
at last,
to see a new day.
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Always this has been a theme of sincere poets. How it is a perfect simile of hope and faith. Well done. Do not shy away from happy and hopeful themes even in the midst of horror and despair. there is always hope as long as mankind has a glimmer of humanity left. Regards, Susan
A never-ending cycle for night workers Vaibhav! Very nicely written Mark
This was not too long and there were no wasted words. It was clear and meaningful. A nice perspective presented well. GW62
A new day, a new start, good write from you Vaibhav 10 Lynda xx
never ending hope........enjoyed, , , , , , , , please read some of my poems... 10 votes
an optimistic approach is full of confidence. nicely drawn
i love the last line..to fight another new day..you are a strong person, keep up the positive side
each day is a beginning of a new journey....to be accomplished and put behind.nice poem vaibhav, i really enjoyed reading it. ritty