A New Day. Comments

Liked this.I often feel the same.Will read more of your poems.Best wishes Gillian

Liked this.I often feel the same.Will read more of your poems.Best wishes Gillian

Beautiful poem, there are times when we would all like to stay asleep rather than face the world.

Really beautiful depth and passion, thank you, Viola

So true Viola! I could often keep my eyes shut and wish the day would go away! Great piece. Mark

i've known many a morning like this-rude rude awakening!

Enjoyed this poem Viola......and thankyou

I'm lost without a reason to face each day so am I... I liked this I can relate to it. good job. *Purkey Girl*

enigmatic enchatning all the way submerged in the eclectic dreams bay

A well written poem. It's hard to wake from the comfort of night or our dreams, even to slip out of a lovers arms to start the day. It was a sensitive warm poem. Good work

enchanting metaphores

A very beautiful poem is written.10 for it.

I love this piece Viola, allow dreamers to lie, or live the way they want 10+ regards Tom

I like the piece very much

A beautiful piece of writing, sensative and imagry intact well baland thought provoking, deep feelingsin this work loved it Chris x 10

the mind remains shut eyes, longing to get cradled in thoughts once sweet...the paining realities shall wait dawning in...the phrase- his sleeping eyes, speaks a lot there... good poetic painting of pain emotions 10+

This poem speaks splendidly of the desire to keep the past tucked in the present and a totally contented soul that asks for no more.....hurt and pain included........Excellent write. Arya

An 'awesome poem' Viola, pleasing and gracefully penned! ! *10*! ! Another delightful read! ! Best wishes, Friend Thad