Sunday, May 4, 2008

A New Day… Comments

Rating: 5.0

The clouds make way,
for the sun to make a smooth appearance,
as the golden ball emerges,
and envelopes the darkness of night,
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Mehreen Tahir
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Muhammad Javed Zeshan 20 November 2013

good one nature abundant reminds the day break/dawn

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Aijaz Asif 17 November 2008

a nice and refreshing write indeed, you defined the beauties of the day break very beautifully here, very well penned...thanks 10

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Fahim Sayed 18 May 2008

Nice and refreshing thoughts....of a new morning......

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Laurence Overmire 17 May 2008

Refreshing and invigorating! Thank you.

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Sadiqullah Khan 15 May 2008

good imagery and view of sunrise, , , nice write

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Lynda Robson 14 May 2008

I think you have described daybreak so well here, I really enjoyed reading it, Best wishes Lynda x

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Andrew Leclair 12 May 2008

the image show in this poem is beautiful...well done

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Golden ball lost its way drowned in my coffee mug there is blinding light in every vein sun of your absence never sets hither Wonderful Mehreen- :)

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Howard Johnson 07 May 2008

A most beautiful write, filled with rich immagery, Thank you for letting me read, , Mehreen,

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Ian Bowen 04 May 2008

Nice poem, well penned. Ian

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