A New Day. Comments
('Make it new'. Ezra Pound) .
When my fig tree is sprouting green leaves
and the lone camellia has budding pink flowers
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The flow of the poem is quite fascinating, the landscape that the poem seeks to paint is as awesome as the action that is taking place in a placid manner. Thanks for sharing this masterpiece.
I realize now that there must be a good flow (rhythm) to the poem. I do think that the surrounding landscape is quite picturesque too. Thanks for such an accurate comment.
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7/20/2025 11:21:01 AM # 1.0.0
A beautiful poem with a sweet flow. Very nicely crafted and like to read again and again. Thanks for sharing.
Thanks a lot for noticing the main features of the poem, including 'the sweet flow', which I was not so aware of myself.