Sunday, March 27, 2016

A New Day Comments

Rating: 5.0

i watched 'e sun lazily dawn
i heard 'e birds' cheer laudy:
the new day break shine,
the new day break is sweet!
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Antonio Williams
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Antonio Williams 27 March 2016

thanks for your comment Ratnakar Mandlik

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Ratnakar Mandlik 27 March 2016

A beautifully conceived inspirational and short but sweet poem. Enjoyed reading. Thanks for sharing.10 points.

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