Wednesday, November 19, 2014

A New Dawn To Start A Journey Comments

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O thou traveller, this is a vital voyage,
Keep patience while turning each page...
It's is the start of a new journey, a new dawn
After the last night spent on the same lawn...
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Tawfeeq Hasan Khan
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Rajnish Manga 05 December 2015

Today I have come again here enticed by the charm of the poem. It is indeed a tribute to that important phase of of life we call 'youth'. Thanks. Before it gets cold here, you should have your tea... As souls come and souls leave this world of sorrow, As for you, there may or may not exist tomorrow...

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Rajnish Manga 19 November 2014

My God, Tawfeeq Hasan Khan, if I am not wrong you are 15 at present and you have composed this remarkable poem. Entire poem is worth reading again and again owing to its shear beauty, but the following lines are outstanding: Singing melancholic songs of yesterday's sorrows / As to succeed doesn't mean not to fail at all / But to rise up each time we have a fall...

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Tawfeeq Hasan Khan

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Bilaspur, Chhattisgarh, India
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