A New Dawn (Sequel To 'Across The Wide Expanse') Comments

Relational resurrection is indeed possible through the power of love. Well worded my friend!

Powerful expression and emotion. A great poem for a supportive partner to read to their loved one when they are feeling low - their soul 'drowning'. |

What a beautiful heart winning poem. Your pain is now mine to ease and heal Thank you so much for sharing. Regards.

After reading the previous poem, I conclude that this is an happy-ending love story; when the couple have survived the storms of life, and ultimately, embracing the beauty of love. Very emotional and touchy...Loved it!

At your broken sprit that is unable to leap. Very wonderfully presented master piece of poem. Nice one really.

Swimming against the ravages of time, if we still manage to reach the shore, what better bounty can we reap? A beautiful poem where maturity ripens the raw fruit.

I sense that this poem is written not to any one person in particular, but to Mother Eire. This poem expresses the deep sympathy that Hazel feels for Ireland's latest plight, austerity. Ireland this time, Hazel, is not alone, this is a global issue. Hopefully we are witnessing capitalism (as we know it) in it's death throes. Maybe lighting the candle of hope will deliver for us all a more equal and just society. Another excellent write.

Against the wars of time, Winning each others hearts as we grow old, With peace, love and respect as we join the fold, Your pain is now mine to ease and heal, ......I like these lines, Deep feeling and expression found in this poem. Broovy composition.

A great follow up poem, love goes through many emotions.

After a break up, it is now time to reunite! A new dawn awaits and a warm invitation is extended! If a life of togetherness is built on the solid ground of love, peace and harmony, you can fly across the wide expanse, listening to the song of angels! A poem overflowing with warm feelings and deep emotions! Enjoyed much!

Peace, harmony and love is around Like a new dawn is found, Our favourite song is playing, the beautiful sound, Fills our eyes with wonder and love, Like flying across this wide expanse Hearing angels singing from above. A great message through a beautiful poem........................10

As in...The Wide Expanse, we must remember that Life is funny....Please Light the candle of hope...... and money doesn't make the world go round it only makes the ride nicer.... Join hands Hazel to climb this mountain. You will get to the top. x