A New Dawn Comments

A compelling and creative cry for change!

I was drawn to the title: 'A New Dawn'. The poem is as fresh as a new dawn. The time has come... The need for a new justice Freedom from all these demi gods of money. Sun burn away... Melt these gods and their ice palaces Leave nothing behind But God's judgement. Very strong and impressive words. Good theme, nice message, good write. Enjoyed reading.Thanks for sharing.

Loved the imagery and poetic flow. A new dawn, , a new beginning! Beautifully penned.; D

You express yourself with creative passion. I like your imagery. It is original and noteworthy. Thank you. Wishing you well, Sandra

Amazing poetry ‘Freedom from all these /demi gods of money.’ Yeah Freedom from shackles and of all bondage will bring New Dawn …a great poetry on optimism 10/10 Ms. Nivedita UK

I can only say one word: amazing.

i truely enjoyed this poem quite deeply. i may and might realate to this alot.

A Truly profound and well worth the time to read and gleen the insight. I appreciate the truth and all of her splendors. Keep up the good fight. Marcel

Beautiful, Such Beauty in a New Dawn, the light shining on our hearts may perish. Truely, Lovely :)

wow...i luvd this one...love the message it conveys

Leave nothing behind But God's judgement wonderful rational poem, very well written 10/10

This poem reminded me of the first warm, sunny day we experience each year. It puts a smile on your face and give you a jolt of energy. You are a great writer who shows deep thought and passion. You have a lot to say that needs to be heard, so write, write away!

i cant find words to describe this wonderful poem it was like you were born to spread poems through the world...sent from somewhere you can only see in dreams just to come and give beautiful amazing poems to everyone to read keep on writing id love to read more

You are truly destined to write...I like this poem very much....very powerful message here, for all of us....god's judgement is ultimate...rest all shall melt away

that was great i would say some thing better but i am a bad speller i loved the way you put in how a god like figure would one day be fallen down bye a new age of freedom really touched my heart!

it's beautiful in it's own way.

Splendid piece, almost a flair of ole'

i have nothing to wite all i can say is i love it

I am so speechless so trapped in words...in thoughts...and I am commenting? whom? what am I thinking? I can read and awe at masterpiece...people like me should not comment...a master of perfection! ..

'Oh sun come... part the long dark hair of night'... beautifully poetic expression this...good work Afzal...thanks...10