Friday, November 1, 2013

A New Dawn #1 Comments

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Surrounded by yesterdays
aftermath
heavenly aromas lingered
together we penetrated
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Heather Burns
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Tirupathi Chandrupatla 03 November 2013

A new dawn arose leading to a beautiful day. Nicely said. Thank you.

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Valsa George 02 November 2013

Beautiful scene and beautiful experience! Enjoyed! !

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Wahab Abdul 02 November 2013

wow! a fantastic poem...great are lines to read aloud...bravo.

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Yasmin Khan 01 November 2013

It's a beautiful poem throbbing like a young heart. a beautiful scene has been depicted.

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