A New Date Comments

Just read this today and am filed with great joy - reminds me of my meeting the greatest girl a man could have - my wife beautiful blue eyes and a well worn dress a new history awaits writing words sewn in threads of Dave's soul

Waking up to know you are back on track with what you love do and feel is quite marvelous! A 10.

Stunning stunning poem - it holds so much promise... I agree with Brittany about my favourite lines...

I absolutely love this... I see it playing out as I read it... My favorite lines: 'Beautiful blue eyes, and a soul to match. Guitar voice lips, And piano hands.' Mmm, I suppose I'm partial to the last line because I'm a pianist. :)

Hello David, if this is still recent then congradulations my friend. Good read, LC

... it's a bit like realising you've been asleep for years, isn't it. A lovely piece... and good luck to you.... t x

I like the lyricism of this one, i am curious about waht happens on the second date and the day after - i just wanna believe that the fairy-tale will continue...

Gosh, David. Has she conquered your beautiful old, cynical heart? Wonderful if she inspires you to such lovely verses. Fx

Simply beautiful...'guitar voice lips and piano hands'... your imagery is stunning, seems like you've found the perfect muse... j x

Sounds delightful, possible flip of the stomach? Must be love..... HG: -) xx

sounds like you might have found someone you enjoy. kudos kiddo. it's got that moving on feeling.

a special moment like this will last forever............i can relate to this.......