A New Date # 3 Comments

Your endings are always great and surprising! Sensual poem.... you really write well, David... I'm not surprised though... you are certainly consistent. Yuri*

Nice poem. You always provide a good twist. Fx

An undressing of minds as well as bodies here...the observations of male vs female throughout evolution bubbles to the surface - the laws of sexual attraction are on display here in this astutely observed narrative. Another fine piece here David. j x

Its a really good pice of work I really like how you expressed your feelings nice work! !

Wow, this fast paced poem is quite steamy lol, nicely written David, Lynda xx

Mmmm.... should this one have come with a warning? ? HG: -) xx