Tuesday, April 22, 2008

A New Beginning Comments

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I built Four walls
around my battered soul
To help my eternal bruises
fade away
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Andra Wadas
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Dr.subhendu Kar 04 July 2010

You lured my spirit With your tender glance I felt your warmth Begin to melt my hear.................... heart yet reels through mists of love as fountain cascades over riff of rocks yet soul sates once again melting reeks wall of separation yet slowly dissolves by enticing.....wonderful write by rhythm of reason implicit, ingeniously curved by the craving of heart as when sneaking into core within.yet it mellows deep,10++, thanks for sharing

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A new beginning, a new day has joy. A garden enclosed no more, , love has opened the door! . I loved this poem. Love; D

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Colin Jeffery 23 July 2008

Very moving and from a poet of merit

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Sulaiman Mohd Yusof 22 April 2008

hi andra.....i loved this piece of yours.............what a time to start reading your works............it has just begun

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Andra Wadas

Andra Wadas

Levittown PA
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