A New Beginning Comments

Hi honey! they say with so ease, My stone faced gaze would return the greet, Followed with my meekly smile hiding the stun. a wonderful poem. tony

I still let them walk through my mind, With their fresh clean feet, And their ever bright smiles, Flashing a profound new style....lucid expression! Your poems are very simple, sweet and highly expressive! (10)

A new beginning of good thing / time is always a term of welcome to me. Your A New Beginning is a wonderful poem, thanks for sharing, You may like to read my poems, thanks

Good rendition of words to utmost justice. Witty reflection that resonates with the vibration of reality, well thought out with conviction. Thanks for sharing Ashika.

..every new beginning starts with Newest thoughts.. Not discouraging you Poet but.. Tracy chapman's Song is what you meant in all your lines? ? - Siddartha

Oh. My. Word. I love your voice. And oh how I appreciate how you look at this world and the players in it. Your views are fresh and alive with intelligence and charm and yet there are shadows of life experiences behind some lines that make me wonder what and why and admire your clear-eyed gaze at this new world you find yourself in. 10++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++

Clean wide path! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

Nice one, , , good reasoning....10 It is good to change color And die for honor Nothing is remembered Even if you are martyred

A whole new air and the clean wide path will adore the moment of friendship with perception of beauty of life. The goodness gathered in life matters a lot for new journey. Absorbing light of wisdom drop by drop is definitely valuable. An excellent New Year poem is beautifully penned....10

Nice one....Fresh beginning.. good concept...10 We are infant democracy And lot more to learn for the country But as of today, we are ridden with cast, creed and religion But we hope to prosper positively in the region

Ashika, such an interesting write👍👍👍