Friday, May 15, 2015

A New Beat Comments

Rating: 5.0

Why do love songs always end in tears?
Why does change initially fill us with so many fears?
Why does our loved ones have to go?
Why, oh why do they leave us without their special comfort and love?
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Hazel Durham
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Edward Kofi Louis 17 November 2016

Why do love songs always end in tears? Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Ramesh Rai 23 June 2015

Love is fragile so it brings tears.

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Geetha Jayakumar 02 June 2015

Many questions goes unanswered yes, love songs always ends in tears either they departed us with sweetness or may be departed with bitterness. yes, once the song was there which will be again heard in New Beats. Beautiful write and fantastic flow make it ever beautiful read. Loved it.

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Akhtar Jawad 24 May 2015

In literature tragedy has always dominated. Sweetest are the songs that end in tears.

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Lyn Paul 24 May 2015

Your amazing Hazel. I feel our hearts are from the same shelf. Thank you for being so giving.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 24 May 2015

Where love is true not just a fleeting treat, But a lifelong bond, As we now live happily on our street.........Yes, love is true but true love is eternal. It is a lifelong bond, nicely and aptly presented by you. Best poem I enjoyed.

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Where love is true not just a fleeting treat, But a lifelong bond, Very powerful lines. Superb

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Sekharan Pookkat 20 May 2015

New beat for a new song Just from the traditional band skies in the sky And dances in the soft mist.- so beautiful penning

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Stephen Katona 19 May 2015

For me this is a great poem about being brave enough to change and so find love - marching to a new beat with a step different from those around and climbing the high fence. My favourite lines which could stand alone as a quote are: 'Change is about releasing the old And looking forward with a heart so bold' A great read for anyone needing a spot of bravery to find love.

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Valsa George 19 May 2015

Yes, continue to live in a land of happiness where love is not a fleeting treat, but a life long bond! A song of love's fulfillment! Enjoyed!

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Akhtar Jawad 19 May 2015

Where love is true not just a fleeting treat, But a lifelong bond, As we now live happily on our street. A sweet lovely song.

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Lyn Paul 15 May 2015

I believe you and I are very fortunate Hazel. We do not request anything but a new beat. We have climbed many mountains and appreciate the simplest things. We do often ask WHY, yet really, we know the answers. Adore your work.

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