Wednesday, October 8, 2014

A-Never Seeing You Comments

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Feather buoyant on aromous winds
Afloat like canoe sleeps on a quiet sea,
Aye, simmering tunes struggle against the weight,
The gait bears similarity to the newly broken colt
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Sadiqullah Khan
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Tajudeen Shah 09 October 2014

using the basic poetic beautifying tools have the bard succeeded in expressing such a fervent desire to know the war-beaten beauty. wonderful. reminds me of those classical hearts of the past. good to know you. intimate me next time, when you have new postings. God bless. keep penning for those who love poesy at her seductive instincts well-revealed. bravo.

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