Life is never ending process
It has no pause or recess
It beats on in different form
Constant changes with very good reform
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I enjoyed reading this poem. It has a wonderful message. Nicely done.
congratulations - for your lovely poem being chosen as the member poem. This is beautiful poem in deed about the human life and it's passage. Thanks for sharing
You always write from life experiences. Your poems are easy to relate with. Thanks for sharing
Excellent in form and content both.Well-rhymed and beautifully rhythmical. Clear, simple and understanable. I liked it very much.
congratulations and I enjoyed reading this lovely poem about life and the livings..
Congrats on having this poem as poem of the day...This poem has a very positive message but it seems to just ramble on and on...it would sound so much better if it could be constructed in a more orderly manner...but this is just a personal opinion which I hope would be taken positively...
life begins anew each time we open our eyes... lives on in the moments shared, small things given, a hand, an ear that listens, a heart that cares... very good poem!
Beautiful poem. Opens up many facts of life and experience before us. Full of wisdom and strength. Friend, thanks for sharing it.Marks 10 Rekhamandagere
i enjoyed your rhythmical verses....process, recess...form, reform...long, wrong...sweet, greet, meet, feet....journey, honey, money, funny....length, strength...hurdles, bundles... great one sir...keep writing
It beats on in different form Constant changes with very good reform
You are sharing treasure by your writing, thank you again. You seem to want to share kindness always, we should be gratefull. I believe poets live forever, its not just a cliche. Transcending thought will help your spirit to escape the physical, materialism never brings happiness only bitterness. I can say in a moment you can be gone but your words will be read a million times.
'I wish I have some treasure to share I searched all over but found no where' Well, sir, I can see your treasure It feeds me, I'll have a tiny slice if you dont mind Your poems, I can't measure nor explain how good it feels to have a bit of share. Thank you
hey friend i.tink you have wrong tink, about this poem.LIFE NEVER ENDING, in the world not eternely just temporary, i.tink life ending if some poeple died, but your poem realy great, God luck.
ife is never ending process It has no pause or recess It beats on in different form rightly said so...10
Life is never ending process It has no pause or recess It beats on in different form..it is puzzle n never ending...10
Life seems to me as no problem at all I take it as challenge and useful call What is use of crying over split milk? When there is no water even to drink A well deserved poem of the day, congratulations, A lovely isometric view of life has been painted with beautiful colors.