(a Neophyte Poet) Comments

nice rhyme marvin you are in.

i'm out of words marvin..a 10.thanks you have created something very beautifuly that every artist feel in thee

Thanks dear Marvin for sharing this piece with us. Are you sure that you are a neophyte poet? You are a born poet.You have poetic talent.Do not bother about who says what.Just express your soul.

excellent write...nice rhymes couplets stanzas...well done... Ency Bearis

The last two stazas are very good - on the one hand - nice demonstration of rhyming Rhyme is when difference in tune When flowers bloom in early June... on the oder hand they bring joy and liberty - no strict rules, even in rhyming. Good word to the Neophyte Poets...and not only! best regards, one