Wednesday, October 12, 2016

A Neighbor Comments

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A neighbor walks quickly passed me
at the entrance of our apartment building.
He greets me with a minimal statement,
no welcome this day, and holds the door open
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Daniel Brick
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Cigeng Zhang 14 October 2016

You vividly portrayed your neighbor with your poetic eyes. Interesting!

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Galina Italyanskaya 13 October 2016

Much enjoyed this! Last night I watched a movie, about Stanley Milgram, it's called Experimenter. And one of his experiments was familiar strangers. It was very resembling your poem, Daniel!)

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Fabrizio Frosini 12 October 2016

that neighbor of yours looks familiar to me..

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Daniel Brick

Daniel Brick

St. Paul MN
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