Sunday, September 11, 2011

A Need I Need Comments

Rating: 4.2

For instance, I open my doors
Give you reasons for why
Why I need you
No measure for stances
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Heather Wilkins 05 August 2013

a good write I get cold in the summer in the absence of you for which I need you. nice.

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Masarapu Navyasree 27 June 2012

very nice poem.i think ur very much passionate in writing.and i feel nice for reading it

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Jessie Jett 21 March 2012

Painted a good picture, and feel the passion in it. Good writing!

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grame peele 03 November 2011

you are a need as the space, the space between you and me! what a piece very good.

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lover of poetry sweet 13 October 2011

last two lines brings the whole love kingdom on earth.brava!

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Jacqui Broad 08 October 2011

Heartfelt love declaration? If you ask a girl's hand in marriage with this sweet poem, she'd say yes, for sure. Your living become my living. Till death do us part...

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Bernard Snyder 28 September 2011

'I be in her stances, working with circumstances'(what a line) ! ! Very nice poem Mr.Kumar!

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Amir Forougi 27 September 2011

A flood of emotions and ideas............

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I Like it Bravo! I Like It Very Consise And Straight Foward Keep It Up

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