A Need For Words Comments

Such a sad sentimental poem....You can never know when it will come to an end. When it does you always wish for the last words you exchange to be something different.

You're doing some strong and valid poetry at the moment. I, for one, prefer the short lines and free verse to your rhyming ones - good as you are at rhyming.

I can see that there are at least seven subhuman beings on this site. They do not hesitate to mess on a poem of grief and loss. Shame.