Sunday, June 17, 2007

A Necktie Or A Noose For Father's Day Comments

Rating: 5.0

My lovely wife gave me a Father's Day card this morning
Because she knows our daughter will probably forget Dad
....unless she needs some money for gas
The card was hand made with a picture on the front
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Margaret Alice 25 June 2007

My sentiments exactly, I have never considered divorce, but murder, frequently. It relieves the feelings ever so much more! Great poem, nice humourous touch at the end - and based on reality! Kind regards, Margaret.

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Elysabeth Faslund 24 June 2007

Okay, you had me going with nostalgia, right up until the Homicide. I thought the 'noose' was going to be the memories of your little daughter and the tackle box, restricting breathing until a tiny tear...but, NO! Well, if it's any consolation...50% of all marriages end in divorce...but they don't say anything about the ones that end in knife or gun play. Love this surprising poem! What a spontaneous father you must be! xxElysabeth

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Dee Daffodil 23 June 2007

Ted...I loved this one. It was filled with beautiful sentiment right up to the end! ! LOL...I really think my favorite part is the ending though...it brings reality to Hallmark! ! : -) It's going in my favorites...maybe every 5 years or so, I'll read it over...just to do a reality check...: -) Hugs, dee

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Chris Mendros 19 June 2007

You know, i've often wondered what the difference was between a necktie and a noose. Just what did Ted Wiiliams know? The joys and frustrations of fatherhood are nicely juxtaposed here. And a nice 'thank you' to the wife for making it all possible, keeping it all in perspective, and that trademark TS humor at the end. Happy Dad's day to you. It is the number one holiday for collect calls, you know...

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fanniesson - 19 June 2007

Like the poem the ending’s what makes it real lots won’t see this enjoyed

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Sara Coslett 17 June 2007

I could really sense the frustration in your heart Ted. Don't let your daughter age you before your time. She loves you for more than what's in your wallet. She's just afraid that if she shows it, you'll have power over her. Give her ten years. You'll see. Anyway, tender thoughts and clever twist at the end. But then, what would a Ted Sheridan poem be without that twist? Happy Father's Day. ~ Sara

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Not a member No 6 17 June 2007

Touching and real recollections and conclusion. Liz

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