Saturday, January 2, 2016

A Necklace Of Pearls Comments

Rating: 5.0

Thanks for coming on the shop of my heart.
It's a necklace of pearls,
from my eyes that fell in love,
it's price is high,
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Akhtar Jawad
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Valsa George 08 January 2016

Those who visit your shop though may not be able to purchase a necklace of pearls, will get at least a garland of flowers, I am sure, for it is free in your shop! What a generous shop keeper! To meet one with a heart full of love itself is highly rewarding! Great imagination Akhtar ji!

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M Asim Nehal 04 January 2016

And a worthwhile visit to a pure heart, a heart filled with LOVE....Awesome poem, Really, really liked it Janab..100++++

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Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 03 January 2016

A beautiful poem as fresh as the pink rose and the lustrous pearls. A heart full of necklace of pearls! Wonderful imagery! A striking poem that spells magic! Jawad ji Kudos! Deserves a full 10!

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Kelly Kurt 02 January 2016

I could never write like this and so I count on Akhtar Jawad to do so.

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