A Necessary Light Comments

Awesome :) I enjoyed reading this poem, thanks.

I like this poem very much as it reminds me of all the evil we have to fight daily in our lives.

Beautiful poem.........a lot like how I feel. Almost written with the same effect of the world in one of my poems Great poem Thank you

surely an unnecessary evil befel men but the loving father manifested his self by shining our path to redemption. Nice thoughtful piece

what makes this piece perfect is the redemption theme...In him there beacons, everlasting light

The Garden of Eden state is a state of innocence, which had to be lost in order for man to progress in evolutionary terms - hopefully his evolution will carry him forward to a state of enlightenment and the return of goodness. Very good poem.

A deep and thoughtful piece. Well done.

The contrast between light, dark, good, evil of course has been done many times, but yours was novel and interesting. I enjoyed the read.

Nice poem... I suppose that's why we have so much 'bad stuff' all around us... Terry